Monday, October 9, 2017

sweat shops Dreams

In his the Sweatshop Oppression essay, Rajeev Ravisankar exposes sweatshop labor. Rajeev states "college students wait until black Friday to buy  as much as they can for little as possible." However, Rajeev also states "that means the extensive use for sweat shop labor". Sweatshop labor is a pejorative term for a workplace that has poor, socially unacceptable working conditions. For example, a foreign person cant work, he or she will work at a shop for pennies or cheaper. However, that foreign person works for hours for cheap.

Rajeev states "these workers are forced to work for 70-80 hours per week". His goal is to show society that buying goods for low may save you money, but it increases sweatshops. However, Rajeev got ways in the essay to try to stop it. For example, he states disregard for well-being through sweatshop oppression. Me, personally, I don't think you can prevent it or stop it, People are going to buy cheaper goods regardless. However, if you stop it the people that can't work and going to lose jobs. So stopping it, is going to effect the employees either way.

1 comment:

  1. You included all parts of a rhetorical situation. You did not mention any means of persuasion. For the rhetorical strategies, you did not mention the rebuttal or strengths or weaknesses. You did include your position on the topic. I rate this blog post a 3 because you did not include all parts of a rhetorical analysis.

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